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The Merchant-king by ~Bazarov:iconBazarov:



A loud-mouthed braggart struts around
In vestiges of power
Crowned and balmed by lesser men
Who know but how to cower
His robe in silk and purple cloth
Regalia of solid gold
Speak not the price in greasy coins
For which these things were sold

Of ruling the empire he has bought
He doesn't know a thing
He has no virtue, wit or knowledge
To guide him as a king
Formerly a petty merchant
His coins did not suffice
To satisfy his lust for more -
For more, at any price!

Yet merchants are not noblemen
And never they can be
These castes are bred for different things
Confusing them is heresy
Or so it was in better days
Of ancient wisdom's rule
Back when a crown required virtue
Not the coin of a random fool

What the false king does not know
Is his reign's impermanence
And noone dares to speak the truth
In fear he will take offense
Barbarians from the northern wastelands
Gather a growing horde
Ready to slaughter, burn and plunder -
Victory will be their reward.
©2008-2009 ~Bazarov
:iconbazarov:

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Asperius nihil est humili, quum surgit in altum.
- Claudianus

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:iconradarmantro:
Kind of reminds me of "Roderick", only that the message is the opposite; here you give an example of someone who can be considered severly disfunctional when it comes to leadership, while Roderick was quite the opposite.

And as can be expected from you; good rhymes and good rhythmn, wide range of words and good vocabulary.

But... we can conclude with: "All hail the northern barbarians"? :P

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"I think that Digimon and Pokemon should be introduced into the science curriculum in schools and universities... Is I am nots smart?"
:iconbazarov:
Thank you very much.

As in "Roderick", there is also a psychological layer of interpretation: the empires could symbolize persons, with each king as its conscious element. Roderick would in that case be seen as "warlike aggression turned inward". In the case of "the merchant-king", in the political layer of interpretation, "all hail the northern barbarians" if they decide to trash the kingdom and kill everybody, but not if they passively settle down as parasites for cheap labour.

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End the tedium of modern existence - death to the Undermen.
:iconradarmantro:
I see... I think I understand both poems a bit better, in the light of your own personal interpretations. Maybe I've been viewing them too superficially.

By the way, the whole thing with "all hail the northern barbarians" were just for teh lulz, just for the notice :P

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"I think that Digimon and Pokemon should be introduced into the science curriculum in schools and universities... Is I am nots smart?"
:iconcroxus:
Jeg er enig med Radarmantro om at den minner noe om Roderick, men jeg tror det er mer en assosiasjon om at du har skrevet om en konge/leder. Men ja, jeg likte det, og jeg blir igjen småsjalu på evnen du har å uttrykke deg.

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just nod your head and say"yes mistress"
:iconbazarov:
Takk.

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End the tedium of modern existence - death to the Undermen.

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